Ch. 0, Pages 7-9

December 3rd, 2018, 12:01 pm

     Average Rating: 5.00      
This one took a lot of coffee

Author Comments:

miloneuman, December 3rd, 2018, 12:13 pm     Reply

Happy December!

Not much to say on this one, other than HANG IN THERE through all this silent setup. There are pages with actual plot and dialogue coming up soon, though maybe not in the immediate next update.

Fun fact, the first two pages were drawn around a year ago, and the third page was drawn this week because I thought this story beat needed something a little extra. Don't know if it was worth the effort or not, I guess that's up to posterity to decide.

By the way, thank you so much for reading, and if you are a returning reader, thanks so much for coming back. I know two weeks between pages can seem like an eternity, and I appreciate your patience. Your comments and support are the coals that feed my engine, you all keep me going, and I am eternally grateful.

miloneuman, December 5th, 2018, 2:10 pm     Reply

We aRe(SS) Pleased To Serve

Hey everyone asking about an RSS feed, I finally figured out how to put a link on my page, all by myself, like the grown adult that I am. Check the LINKS section right under the comments and above the Favorites.

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User Comments:

Wazaga, December 3rd, 2018, 12:50 pm     Reply

*Senpai...*
C-can I just mentor you? Teach me the ways of ink!!!!!

GrannyPaige (Guest), December 3rd, 2018, 1:06 pm     Reply

Beautiful work, son!
Hi Milo,
What you beautiful work you’ve done on this project. This reminds me that I was on the right track when I allowed you to draw your way through high school. I’m so proud of your work ethic and amazed by the way your mind works and how you use your gifts. Much love! Ma

flieswithowls, December 3rd, 2018, 1:58 pm     Reply

Amazing pacing
I am enthralled with the way this is opening is paced. This is the most cinematic comic I have ever seen.

nightsbridge (Guest), December 4th, 2018, 11:39 am     Reply


Yoo this is so cool! Is there an RSS For this webcomic I can plug into my feed?

Guest, December 4th, 2018, 11:49 am     Reply

Nice Artwork! RSS?
Hi, is there an RSS feed for this comic? It's beautiful!

Anthemis (Guest), December 4th, 2018, 11:55 am     Reply


Holy jikes, that's art right there.

Scott (Guest), December 4th, 2018, 12:17 pm     Reply

Oh snap
I came from Daughter of the Lilies and I'm glad I did. This is gorgeous. Keep going, stay strong! I believe this can really be something fantastic!

miloneuman, December 4th, 2018, 12:58 pm     Reply


@nightsbridge:

Um...... let me figure out how to get that set up and I'll get back to you!

Down Stream (Guest), December 4th, 2018, 1:28 pm     Reply

Those masks
I am loving the mask designs for these characters. That plus the outfit/armor designs make this 100% my thing.

Talina (Guest), December 4th, 2018, 1:38 pm     Reply

Holy ink pens
Amazing work!

Random Reader (Guest), December 4th, 2018, 2:44 pm     Reply

Welp
I'm absolutely hooked. I haven't seen a comic this beautifully and luxuriously illustrated in a long time. Well worth however long any wait may be.

Sahara (Guest), December 4th, 2018, 5:02 pm     Reply


I actually love the story being told without words (so far). I know there is a time and place for dialogue, but there is something so satisfying to me when it can be told successfully without. And you, sir, are exceeding expectations. I'm glad I came back to revisit it, beyond the first page.

Guest, December 4th, 2018, 6:02 pm     Reply


Daughter of the Lilies sent me here too, and I'm really glad it did. Count me as another one who'd follow you on RSS if I could. :)

metalshop (Guest), December 4th, 2018, 7:53 pm     Reply


came over here from Daughter of the Lilies, very intrigued by what I see so far. fantastic art.

StLOrca, December 4th, 2018, 9:08 pm     Reply

OH YASSS
Hell of an opening here. The line work is BOSS.

Crazyman (Guest), December 4th, 2018, 9:22 pm     Reply


“I’m Batman.”

fangirl (Guest), December 4th, 2018, 10:04 pm     Reply

beautiful
I'm also here from DOTL. Your artwork is gorgeous! I can't wait to see how your story progresses.

Guest, December 5th, 2018, 2:12 am     Reply


Oh. Oh. Oh WOW. Amazing art, intriguing start. I am totally stunned.

Didn't notice any RSS, is there one? Miss it really.

Snerrir (Guest), December 5th, 2018, 4:36 am     Reply


Whoa! That's one beautiful (and accurate) east-slavic fortress!

Rando (Guest), December 5th, 2018, 6:12 am     Reply


You need a feed URL! :)

Psile, December 5th, 2018, 8:47 am     Reply

Visual Story Telling
The way you illustrate what is happening wordlessly is amazing.

man in black, December 5th, 2018, 9:35 pm     Reply


Good to see you back to making comics Milo

Aksel (Guest), December 6th, 2018, 2:51 am     Reply

Is there an alien invasion going on?
There's a problem with your moon. A friendly shout out: https://xkcd.com/1738/

Honzinator (Guest), December 6th, 2018, 2:04 pm     Reply


@man in black is correct. Well done Milo. It is also ironic, and tantalizing, that the blurb on DoTL reads, "As you can clearly see, the art is illustrative in quality, and you've already had a preview of the author's writing skills. Why not give it a shot?" and we've yet to get to the dialogue, though so far the art is so good I hardly miss it, even though I've read some of your fanfic, I believe.
Well done.
The placement of the fortress, and of the ambushers, makes sense. Dadgum branch. That's gonna hurt unless his outfit snags a tree. I'll bet he was too cold to grab anything else on the way down so far.

The Riles (Guest), December 6th, 2018, 6:55 pm     Reply


Your art is making promises I hope your story can keep. ;)
I found you through Daughter of the Lilies, so in not too worried. Thank you for your awesome work!

ted for short (Guest), December 11th, 2018, 5:39 pm     Reply


Have submitted an entry to the Belfry Web comics Index (https://new.belfrycomics.net)
Guessed on the genre, frequency(weekly) and flags(none). Also came here via DOTL.

BDLC (Guest), December 12th, 2018, 12:35 am     Reply

OMG THIS IS AMAZING!
Breath-takingly beautiful, exquisite, evocative, this blows my mind.
I am so looking forward to this ride!

Spongegirl Circleskirt, December 13th, 2018, 11:37 pm     Reply

Beautiful!
Can’t wait for more!

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